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Echo & Narcissus

Ovid, Metamorphoses Book III · grammar, translation, mythology, and the notes a student wishes she had.

Latin text selected and translated by Patricia.

Prototype chapter•Lines 339–510 collected

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01 · BEFORE YOU READ

The story behind the Latin

Like most if not all ancient myths, Ovid’s story of Echo and Narcissus sought to explain natural phenomena: the wonder of echoes and the narcissus flower. However, Ovid goes beyond offering explanations for these natural occurrences, exploring the destructive extremes of love and obsession. He warns of the dangers of obsession, pride, and unrequited love through his storytelling, as Narcissus falls in love with his reflection and Echo loses her identity falling in love with him. It is in this story where we get the term "narcissism," or self-obsession.

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Nominative Accusative Genitive Ablative Dative Special / complex grammar

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02 · CLOSE READING

From authentic Latin to something a student can decode

The site keeps the original Latin visible, but breaks it into manageable scenes. Highlighted words preserve the grammatical annotations already in the source document.

To be added: a short translator's note — which text/edition this follows, and how the translation process worked

Book III · 339–358

Narcissus is introduced

Ille per Aonias fama celeberrimus urbes inreprehensa dabat populo responsa petenti; prima fide vocisque ratae temptamina sumpsit caerula Liriope, quam quondam flumine curvo inplicuit clausaeque suis Cephisos in undis vim tulit: enixa est utero pulcherrima pleno infantem nymphe, iam tunc qui posset amari, Narcissumque vocat. de quo consultus, an esset tempora maturae visurus longa senectae, fatidicus vates 'si se non noverit' inquit.
vana diu visa est vox auguris: exitus illam resque probat letique genus novitasque furoris. namque ter ad quinos unum Cephisius annum addiderat poteratque puer iuvenisque videri: multi illum iuvenes, multae cupiere puellae; sed fuit in tenera tam dura superbia forma, nulli illum iuvenes, nullae tetigere puellae. adspicit hunc trepidos agitantem in retia cervos vocalis nymphe, quae nec reticere loquenti nec prior ipsa loqui didicit, resonabilis Echo.

Literal translation

Most celebrated with fame throughout Aonian cities, he gave blameless answers to people who asked; cerulean Liriope took the first attempts with faith of his certain voice, whom once Cephisos entangled with his own curved river and he brought force to her closed in the waves: the most beautiful nymph bore an infant from a full womb, who already then was able to be loved, and she calls Narcissus. About whom having been consulted about whether he would see long times of a mature old age, the prophetic seer said “if he will not discover himself.” For a long time, the voice of the augur seemed empty: the death and the story of the death and the manner and the strangeness of the madness proved it. For in fact the son of Cephisius had added one year to fifteen and was able to be seen as both a boy and a young man: many young men, many girls wanted him; but there was such harsh arrogance in his tender form, that none of the young men, none of the girls could touch him. A nymph known for her voice saw him driving frightened stags into nets, who learned neither to keep silent to one speaking nor to speak first herself, resounding Echo.

To be added: annotation connecting Tiresias's prophecy ("si se non noverit") to how it plays out

To be added: illustration — prophecy/mirror motif

Book III · 359–401

Why Echo can only repeat

Corpus adhuc Echo, non vox erat et tamen usum garrula non alium, quam nunc habet, oris habebat, reddere de multis ut verba novissima posset. fecerat hoc Iuno, quia, cum deprendere posset sub Iove saepe suo nymphas in monte iacentis, illa deam longo prudens sermone tenebat, dum fugerent nymphae. postquam hoc Saturnia sensit, 'huius' ait 'linguae, qua sum delusa, potestas parva tibi dabitur vocisque brevissimus usus,' reque minas firmat. tantum haec in fine loquendi ingeminat voces auditaque verba reportat.

Literal translation

Echo still had her body, not a voice and however talkative she was, had no other use of her mouth as she has now, so that she was able to repeat the very last words from many. Juno had done this, because, often when she was able to catch nymphs in the mountains lying under her Jupiter, Echo, aware, held the goddess in a long speech, until the nymphs fled. After the daughter of Saturn noticed this, she said “A small power of this tongue, by which I have been deluded, and the brieftest use of this voice will be given to you,” and she strengthens threats with deeds. Echo only repeats voices at the end of speaking and reports the words having been heard.

Book III · 359–401

Echo sees Narcissus

ergo ubi Narcissum per devia rura vagantem vidit et incaluit, sequitur vestigia furtim, quoque magis sequitur, flamma propiore calescit, non aliter quam cum summis circumlita taedis admotas rapiunt vivacia sulphura flammas. o quotiens voluit blandis accedere dictis et mollis adhibere preces! natura repugnat nec sinit, incipiat, sed, quod sinit, illa parata est exspectare sonos, ad quos sua verba remittat.

Literal translation

Therefore, when she saw Narcissus wandering through remote countryside and became inflamed, she stealthily followed his tracks, and the more she followed, the more she became inflamed with a nearer flame, no differently than when lively sulphur, having been smeared on the tips of torches, catches the flames brought close to it. O how often she wished to approach with flattering words and to employ gentle entreaties! Nature opposes, does not allow, but what it allows, she is prepared to expect sounds, to which she returns her own words.

Book III · 359–401

The conversation that isn't a conversation

forte puer comitum seductus ab agmine fido dixerat: 'ecquis adest?' et 'adest' responderat Echo. hic stupet, utque aciem partes dimittit in omnis, voce 'veni!' magna clamat: vocat illa vocantem. respicit et rursus nullo veniente 'quid' inquit 'me fugis?' et totidem, quot dixit, verba recepit. perstat et alternae deceptus imagine vocis 'huc coeamus' ait, nullique libentius umquam responsura sono 'coeamus' rettulit Echo et verbis favet ipsa suis egressaque silva ibat, ut iniceret sperato bracchia collo; ille fugit fugiensque 'manus conplexibus aufer! ante' ait 'emoriar, quam sit tibi copia nostri'; rettulit illa nihil nisi 'sit tibi copia nostri!'

Literal translation

By chance, the boy, having been separated from his crowd of loyal friends, had said: “is anyone here?” and “here” responded Echo. He is astounded, and casts a glance everywhere, he shouts with a great voice “come!”: she calls the one calling. He looks back and again with no one coming, says “why do you flee me?” and just as many words he said, he received. He persists and deceived by the likeness of the alternate voice, says “Here, let us be together,” and never being about to respond to a sound more gladly, Echo replies “let us be together” and favors her own words and having come out from the woods she goes, to throw her arms around the hoped for neck; he flees and fleeing, says “withdraw the encircling hands! May I die before you have power over me”; she replied nothing except “you have power over me!”

Book III · end of Echo section

Echo fades

spreta latet silvis pudibundaque frondibus ora protegit et solis ex illo vivit in antris; sed tamen haeret amor crescitque dolore repulsae; extenuant vigiles corpus miserabile curae adducitque cutem macies et in aera sucus corporis omnis abit; vox tantum atque ossa supersunt: vox manet, ossa ferunt lapidis traxisse figuram. inde latet silvis nulloque in monte videtur, omnibus auditur: sonus est, qui vivit in illa.

To be added: translation and grammar notes for lines 501–510

A GREAT “LOOK CLOSER” MOMENT

dumque sitim sedare cupit, sitis altera crevit

This is the kind of short literary observation that could make the project feel personal: Narcissus tries to satisfy one thirst while another grows. A student annotation can connect grammar to Ovid's imagery without becoming a formal textbook.

To be added: illustration — a reflected face in a cup or pool, labeled "thirst" and "desire"

03 · SOURCE TEXT ALREADY COLLECTED

The rest of the Narcissus passage

This section is intentionally styled differently: the continuation through line 510 is already collected, but it is not yet presented as finished close reading.

Open original Latin, lines 402–510

Sic hanc, sic alias undis aut montibus ortas
luserat hic nymphas, sic coetus ante viriles;
inde manus aliquis despectus ad aethera tollens
'sic amet ipse licet, sic non potiatur amato!'               405
dixerat: adsensit precibus Rhamnusia iustis.
fons erat inlimis, nitidis argenteus undis,
quem neque pastores neque pastae monte capellae
contigerant aliudve pecus, quem nulla volucris
nec fera turbarat nec lapsus ab arbore ramus;               410
gramen erat circa, quod proximus umor alebat,
silvaque sole locum passura tepescere nullo.
hic puer et studio venandi lassus et aestu
procubuit faciemque loci fontemque secutus,
dumque sitim sedare cupit, sitis altera crevit,               415
dumque bibit, visae correptus imagine formae
spem sine corpore amat, corpus putat esse, quod umbra est.
adstupet ipse sibi vultuque inmotus eodem
haeret, ut e Pario formatum marmore signum;
spectat humi positus geminum, sua lumina, sidus               420
et dignos Baccho, dignos et Apolline crines
inpubesque genas et eburnea colla decusque
oris et in niveo mixtum candore ruborem,
cunctaque miratur, quibus est mirabilis ipse:
se cupit inprudens et, qui probat, ipse probatur,               425
dumque petit, petitur, pariterque accendit et ardet.
inrita fallaci quotiens dedit oscula fonti,
in mediis quotiens visum captantia collum
bracchia mersit aquis nec se deprendit in illis!
quid videat, nescit; sed quod videt, uritur illo,               430
atque oculos idem, qui decipit, incitat error.
credule, quid frustra simulacra fugacia captas?
quod petis, est nusquam; quod amas, avertere, perdes!
ista repercussae, quam cernis, imaginis umbra est:
nil habet ista sui; tecum venitque manetque;               435
tecum discedet, si tu discedere possis!
Non illum Cereris, non illum cura quietis
abstrahere inde potest, sed opaca fusus in herba
spectat inexpleto mendacem lumine formam
perque oculos perit ipse suos; paulumque levatus               440
ad circumstantes tendens sua bracchia silvas
'ecquis, io silvae, crudelius' inquit 'amavit?
scitis enim et multis latebra opportuna fuistis.
ecquem, cum vestrae tot agantur saecula vitae,
qui sic tabuerit, longo meministis in aevo?               445
et placet et video; sed quod videoque placetque,
non tamen invenio'++tantus tenet error amantem++
'quoque magis doleam, nec nos mare separat ingens
nec via nec montes nec clausis moenia portis;
exigua prohibemur aqua! cupit ipse teneri:               450
nam quotiens liquidis porreximus oscula lymphis,
hic totiens ad me resupino nititur ore.
posse putes tangi: minimum est, quod amantibus obstat.
quisquis es, huc exi! quid me, puer unice, fallis
quove petitus abis? certe nec forma nec aetas               455
est mea, quam fugias, et amarunt me quoque nymphae!
spem mihi nescio quam vultu promittis amico,
cumque ego porrexi tibi bracchia, porrigis ultro,
cum risi, adrides; lacrimas quoque saepe notavi
me lacrimante tuas; nutu quoque signa remittis               460
et, quantum motu formosi suspicor oris,
verba refers aures non pervenientia nostras!
iste ego sum: sensi, nec me mea fallit imago;
uror amore mei: flammas moveoque feroque.
quid faciam? roger anne rogem? quid deinde rogabo?               465
quod cupio mecum est: inopem me copia fecit.
o utinam a nostro secedere corpore possem!
votum in amante novum, vellem, quod amamus, abesset.
iamque dolor vires adimit, nec tempora vitae
longa meae superant, primoque exstinguor in aevo.               470
nec mihi mors gravis est posituro morte dolores,
hic, qui diligitur, vellem diuturnior esset;
nunc duo concordes anima moriemur in una.'
Dixit et ad faciem rediit male sanus eandem
et lacrimis turbavit aquas, obscuraque moto                475
reddita forma lacu est; quam cum vidisset abire,
'quo refugis? remane nec me, crudelis, amantem
desere!' clamavit; 'liceat, quod tangere non est,
adspicere et misero praebere alimenta furori!'
dumque dolet, summa vestem deduxit ab ora               480
nudaque marmoreis percussit pectora palmis.
pectora traxerunt roseum percussa ruborem,
non aliter quam poma solent, quae candida parte,
parte rubent, aut ut variis solet uva racemis
ducere purpureum nondum matura colorem.               485
quae simul adspexit liquefacta rursus in unda,
non tulit ulterius, sed ut intabescere flavae
igne levi cerae matutinaeque pruinae
sole tepente solent, sic attenuatus amore
liquitur et tecto paulatim carpitur igni;               490
et neque iam color est mixto candore rubori,
nec vigor et vires et quae modo visa placebant,
nec corpus remanet, quondam quod amaverat Echo.
quae tamen ut vidit, quamvis irata memorque,
indoluit, quotiensque puer miserabilis 'eheu'               495
dixerat, haec resonis iterabat vocibus 'eheu';
cumque suos manibus percusserat ille lacertos,
haec quoque reddebat sonitum plangoris eundem.
ultima vox solitam fuit haec spectantis in undam:
'heu frustra dilecte puer!' totidemque remisit               500
verba locus, dictoque vale 'vale' inquit et Echo.
ille caput viridi fessum submisit in herba,
lumina mors clausit domini mirantia formam:
tum quoque se, postquam est inferna sede receptus,
in Stygia spectabat aqua. planxere sorores               505
naides et sectos fratri posuere capillos,
planxerunt dryades; plangentibus adsonat Echo.
iamque rogum quassasque faces feretrumque parabant:
nusquam corpus erat; croceum pro corpore florem
inveniunt foliis medium cingentibus albis.               510

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